Monday, 13 January 2014

Poetry

We have been looking at shape poetry and calligrams. We have noticed that some shape poems have alliteration in them.

Can you create a whole sentence using alliteration?

Here is an example to help you.

E.g. My mother munched many mangoes.

33 comments:

  1. My mum munches mangos more than muffins.
    Tilly tog taller than a tree.

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  2. My mum munches muffins and mangoes.
    The tall tower ticks away.
    Colurful colurs you can see.

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  3. Wild William wore wellies for walking in water.

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  4. Wild William wore wellies for walking in water.
    By Esme

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    1. I like your link to the outdoors here, Esme!

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  5. Green grassy grounds grow greatly.

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  6. Teacher teaches tactful tactics to tackle tongue twisters

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  7. Bouncy babies bathe in bubbly-bath.

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  8. She sells sea shells on the sea shore.
    the tall tree towers over the tiny turtle

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  9. Delicious diamonds dazzle you with delight

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  10. Here are my sentences :-

    Big, boisterous boys bounced basketballs by busy bees’ beehives.

    The teething, tiny toddler touched the tidy television table-top.

    Amy ate an apple and an avocado as appetisers at Aunty Annabel’s.

    Perfect Peter’s proud pet peacock preened prettily.

    Sensible Sam’s sleek, slimy, spotted snake slept soundly.

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  11. I bought a black banana and broke the bascet bat.

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  12. Here are my 3 sentences :
    1)Sam sssnake sslithers sslowly sso sielently.
    2)Pinky Pie punches pineapples proudly.
    3)Tom`s terrified tiger touches the table trembling.

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  13. Dippy Daddy donkey dropped a diamond down a deep dark drain.

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    1. Isabel I agree that that is creative and a bit funny.

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  14. slithering snakes sometimes see sausages sneaking slowly

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    1. Remember to use a capital letter and full stop Billy. These are basic sentence features which you must always include.

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  15. Sara’s seven sisters slept soundly in sand.
    Jesse’s jaguar is jumping and jiggling jauntily

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  16. Elson Downing street class15 January 2014 at 20:00

    I wasn't being brainy, bright
    or brilliant but you see,
    my brain was boggled after
    bitten by a bee.

    while I nodded I, nearly
    napping, suddenly there
    came tapping.



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    1. Don't worry about making it rhyme. Try again with your own example, just writing a sentence using alliteration.

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  17. Sad Sam said sometimes silly sentences .

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    1. Jagoda,
      Check your work because it is supposed to be Sad Sam SOMETIMES SAYS silly sentences.Good work thougth.

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  18. Many of you are forgetting the basic rules for sentences. They must always start with a capital letter and you need to remember the punctuation at the end.

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  19. Alice adores apricots and apples.

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  20. Clumsy clowns can cover cute cats.
    Slithery, slimy, spotty snakes sleep in the soft sand.
    Happy horses eat hot hay from the horrible, hard, harmful and high hill over the horizon.

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  21. Miss Jolliffe I have got quite a few:
    1)Which witch watches who?
    2)Evil elephants eat everything
    3)Sally sleeps silently.
    4)Caty can control cat`s carefully.
    5)Bob brought brilliant,bright books.
    6)Fire Foxes fight furiously.

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  22. Never eat shreaded wheat
    Bob brought bright balloons
    Smelly foxes chased the boxes

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  23. Elson Downing street class26 January 2014 at 13:11

    my mother munched muffins

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  24. Amy ate a ant`s apple.
    Bob bought big,blue,bright balloon.
    Cat`s call ca-ca-co.
    David`s dad dried dirty dogs.
    Evil Elephants eat emperors.
    Funny,floppy,fuzzy fly`s fly furiously.

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  25. Amy ate an apple's ant. Bob bought a big,blue,boxed balloon. Curious cat's
    call was: Crook-ca-coo! Dan's dad de-dehydrated his dogs.

    I hope you liked that.
    ESPESHELY miss Jollife. from manan.
    Thats all I could think of.

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  26. My mum munched many mangos.
    My mum munched muffins.
    My magical mum magically magiced me my magical mirror.
    Sidney snake slithers slowly
    Anthony ate an apple.
    bob bought a blue big box balloon. crystal

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  27. Snowflakes sway silently.

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